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Sometimes, in the dark, frigid and lonely night
I feel the rattling chains begin their blight
As torrent upon torrent bathe me in fright.

I cast my glance all about this unkind place
And feel my young bones freeze from the vacant space
As dark shadows rise from their rest draped in black lace.

I hold my head, scream and begin the fruitless run
As the residents of hell begin their chase for fun
While I make haste through the wreckage with little caution.

Boney and bleached their marrow outstretched for me
I stumble on the hard, cold ground, upon both knees
And pray to the heavens as I do nothing but bleed.

I am helpless against the spirits who rise from their grave
Whispers on rancid breath telling me I am just a slave
When in truth I am but the beautifully bound nave

Only a fool would believe they could escape the ghosts of time
Despite bruised flesh and broken nails from the desperate and lonely climb
But in the end, when all is done, it is the grave that I find.

And the wrathful dirt of my lone past
Is all I have managed to amass
No longer am I even aghast.

For my eyes close
And the ghosts know
Of my many woes

Of my many woes.
©2008-2009 ~kindergirl
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Another poem about life...its lonely and embarrasing and hard to swallow sometimes. Oh well, at least I can get it all out in rhythm and rhyme :)

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:iconeggplantm:
This poem led me in a couple of different directions. First, it has a lovely macabre theme to it. I was not sure if the person in the poem was tormented by ghosts or was in fact a ghost herself bound to a spot or if it was all metaphoric to begin with. I'm awful with poetry. I also thought this poem was a rather dark poem of gothic angst and woe at first but my second and third times reading it and it reads differently to me now. Is that normal for poetry?

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:iconkindergirl:
I think what makes it hard for you is because you know me and probably try and guess what I am thinking. Poetry is laden with language that is usually difficult, otherwise it is more of a short story than a poem and though the writer has an emotion or tale they want to tell it really is up the the reader.

The poem was intended to be meaphoric for one's regrets and memories: the embarrassing situations that linger in your mind and make you cringe everytime you think of them and the regrets that weigh you down. Though most people try hard to sweep these feelings under the carpet, like ghosts in a grave, they are still there simply buried and when they surface it is frightening and painful.

I hope that helps
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I think so

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