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©2008-2009 ~kindergirl
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I have to tell you that poetry, in its truest form is much harder than stories, which I prefer. However, it is good for an artist who prefers the pen to attempt poems that have very specific requirments.

This is a haiku, which is a traditional poem in ancient china or japan, I forget. It is characterized by having the 5/7/5 syllables and still show the emotions of the person writing.

I guess I was having a bad day when I wrote this. :)

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:iconsexyveganchick:
I really like this. I love how haikus are short and their lack of "fluff" sometimes makes them more meaningful than if the concept was explained in a an open poem with lots of defining words. Good job!

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Je pense que... je ne sais pas... peut-être, je t'aime ♥
:iconrungok:
I like the haiku
They do get their points across
Great job kindergirl.

(Hows that for impromptu?)
:iconshrubninja:
Haikus are really good at showing how someone is feeling, since you don't need to look for any hidden meanings. I think this one is great. :)

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I am a hedge, move along. Nothing to see here.
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:iconeggplantm:
It is a good Haiku. And I usually don't really care for this form of poetry.

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Always looking for more talented anthro artists!
:iconkindergirl:
They are very good but can be tricky, thats why I llike trying them.
:iconkindergirl:
short, sweet and to the point. Just something fun to play around with. I love it when things come together. Thanks!
(Perfect impromptu :) )
:iconkindergirl:
Sometimes the shorter the poem the more difficult they are to write. Personally I tend to overexplain so writing specific poems with very ridgid requirements helps me to be conscise. Thanks for watching! :)
:iconsexyveganchick:
Same here, I tend to write too much (My two term papers this year were 10 and 15 pages, the minimum was 6). But you have quite good practice poems!

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Je pense que... je ne sais pas... peut-être, je t'aime ♥

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